Sunday, February 12, 2012

2012.02.12 — In the leafless tree (A River of Stones#2-12)

In the leafless tree
the crow alit on a branch
and preened in light rain.
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  1. AFebruary 13, 2012 at 8:29 PM

    I just wrote a haiku about a squirrel under a tree....

    Anyway, I like it.

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  2. Guy DuperreaultFebruary 13, 2012 at 9:06 PM

    Hi Al! I went to look for your squirrel Haiku, but it's not posted on your blog.

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  3. AFebruary 13, 2012 at 9:40 PM

    Because it was horribly written! It was just a funny thing that we both wrote about leafless trees with some sort of creature.

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    1. Guy DuperreaultFebruary 13, 2012 at 9:47 PM

      Hey, it can't be that bad! If you want, post it here. Almost no one reads my blog, so it won't be too embarrassing.

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  4. AFebruary 17, 2012 at 8:05 PM

    Squirrels frightened by
    shadows under leafless trees
    and petrified bark.

    It's ridiculous.

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    1. Guy DuperreaultFebruary 17, 2012 at 8:11 PM

      Al, it made me laugh! And not because it is ridiculous, although it may well be, but because of the juxtaposition of images. So, well done, IMO. TY for sharing.

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  5. AFebruary 19, 2012 at 12:44 AM

    Lol, thank you.

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